The details if i haven't misunderstood anything are a bit annoying, but not immersion breaking.

Take FF1 and FF2, Alex swears he is not a champion of Leah with nothing to say otherwise, but in book 2 it is spoken by both Leah and Alex that it is a given that he has been Leah's champion all along. Joshua yeah, don't get me wrong, it's not the story or the universe I have a problem with, it's the details that don't seem to fit from one book to another. If you intended it to sound the way it does then thats another thing, but if it was a ploy to make Vince and Felix bond or to make Felix look more important, then that is kinda iffy, wouldn't you agree? Delete This to me is immersion breaking when there is no explanation in who killed her again since clearly she was alive. Issue with Vince lying about the Resurrection is it was already stated that it had happened and she was wide awake to even communicate. Hope this makes it easier to understand =) This type of crap to me just destroys the immersion because nobody heard the car?, Nobody saw the car?, nobody stopped them from taking him?, nobody shot the wheel or driver?. Worst offender i have read to date has to be a situation that where the good guys were winning hands down bad guy was bleeding out, only to within 2 sentences suddenly a Van shows up out of nowhere and saves the bad guy by dragging him into a Van and taking off. Maybe i didn't put it the right way then, my English isn't the best.īy 'Bad' writing i mean actively hurting already established characters to make new ones look better or for the story to go in ways that are irrational.Įxamples would be: A extremely talented and trained individual with super powers suddenly becomes completely worthless and irrational just so another Character can get some page time, to then suddenly come back on top or save the day.

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